The answer by @HDE 226868 addresses the current attempts by LIGO/Virgo and PTAs to detect alternate gravitational wave (GW) polarization states, which have not been detected. In that answer, this SE question is cited, which shows that gravitational waves being interpreted as tensor perturbations of the flat (Minkowski) spacetime produces only two non-trivial polarization states which are not time-time components and thus do not cause time dilation. However, this does not mean that gravitational radiation cannot generally cause gravitational time dilation, since the components of the strain tensor $h_{\mu\nu}$ are not gauge-invariant quantities, so I think it might not be sufficient to just point at them and claim that there is no time dilation.
In the (mathematically rigorous) paper by Koop and Finn (2014), they characterize the GW amplitude using the Riemann curvature tensor to "provide a new, first-principles derivation of the response of modern, light-time gravitational wave detectors in terms of their interaction with spacetime curvature... Finally, the curvature-based response formula leads to a simpler calculation of light-time detector response than the
corresponding calculations carried out using the metric
perturbation approach." See their Eq. (3.16) for that formula.
Hence, they proved using pure differential geometry that gravitational waves can cause time dilation in a light-time detector, which provides fundamental justification for the ideas used in the paper by Loeb and Moaz (2014) about atomic clocks and gravitational waves.
The Loeb and Moaz (2014) paper outlines a proposed framework to detect the gravitational time dilation due to a gravitational wave that passes through a network of atomic clocks orbiting in space. They use the post-Newtonian approximation, specifically the leading-order mass quadrupole approximation, as seen in their Eq. (1) where the strain depends on the 5/3 power of the chirp mass, e.g. see Eq. (3.9) of Cutler and Flannagan (1994). They cite a seminal paper by A. Sesana (2013), whose Eq. (11) is equivalent to the Eq. (1) of Loeb and Moaz, and Sesana even derives it for us :). In the footnote 1 of Loeb and Moaz (2014), they state:
"In this paper, we adopt for pedagogical reasons a Newtonian
gauge which is commonly used to describe the time-dilation ef-
fect due to stationary gravity, as measured in the Pound-Rebka
experiment 7. In this gauge, an oscillating perturbation in the
time-time component of the metric, $h_{00}$, would trigger periodic
variation in the Pound-Rebka time dilation and a mismatch be-
tween the ticking rate of clocks separated apart."
Therefore, I think that Loeb and Moaz (2014) are just assuming that their Eq. (1) approximates the time-time component of the strain tensor, as means of having a crude approximation to work with for the sake of outlining the idea of the paper, by identifying $f$ as the redshifted frequency, not the intrinsic gravitational wave frequency.
Why are there not yet any atomic clock instruments dedicated to registering time dilation caused by passing gravitational waves?
Mostly because the sensitivity of atomic clock instruments has only recently reached the precision required to make gravitational time dilation measurements, and also because detecting gravitational waves is a rather recent accomplishment. As stated in the intro of Loeb and Moaz (2014), the precision of optical lattice atomic clocks has reached $\sim 10^{-18}$, which is precisely the numerical prefactor in the front of their Eq. (1).
Wouldn't it be interesting to augment LIGO/VIRGO capturing of space distortion with simultaneous capturing time dilation (both caused by the same passing gravitational wave)?
Yes indeed it would! But I think this would require using more sophisticated treatments of the background spacetime, which is dominated by the gravity of the solar system for LIGO/Virgo, rather than treating it as flat. Also, as @HDE 226868 points out, doing this with serious precision requires several ground-based interferometers, which will likely be reality in the future!
EDIT: This was my first answer which is not very relevant for the OP. Although pulsar timing arrays (PTAs) do not measure gravitational time dilation proper, as pointed out by HDE 226868, I'll keep it here for sake of clarity for my own progression in thinking about these questions.
The binary pulsar discovered by Hulse and Taylor in 1974 was the first binary pulsar to be discovered, and it was the first observational verification (later in 1975) of the existence of gravitational waves - however direct detection of gravitational waves did not occur until 2015 by LIGO and Virgo via compact binary coalescences.
Anyway, PTAs is a network of known pulsars whose delays of the time of arrival of pulses of light are correlated by a passing gravitational wave. Intuitively, such a gravitational wave would need to have a long wavelength, so a natural candidate has been the stochastic background of gravitational waves. The various correlations that exist in the networks are handled in a myriad of ways.
The Nanograv consortium has been taking data for over a decade, and recently published this paper announcing their progress. They are on the precipice of making a detection of the stochastic background, but there are some correlations that are still being worked out.
There are other PTAs being designed/constructed so the future looks bright for this field!